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Saturday 22 November, 2008
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This time i do need ur help...

( i wrote few lines two month back..yea i m trying my hands in poetry too. but  as i never wrote any poem before so after  those lines i felt lack of words ..so plz read it n suggest me few more things/words to complete it..)


 


 


I am not sure about my taste ,


 whenever I see a girl its new.



I like many but from whom


 I can choose ‘The One’ are few.



I found the sweetest person ,


  when I met you.



I pretended to be normal


but for me, the feeling was new .



I realized its not only me


who found his 'dream girl' in you



Suddenly I found myself


 in the world’s longest queue….


 


 


 


* i m inspired by many ilanders so words can be similer.. n its not a co-incidence..i proud to be inspired by u ppl)


 

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